英语改错,proof reading

英语改错,proof reading
英语改错,proof reading
 

英语改错,proof reading
1、第一行的playing computer games are 改成 is
2、take tom and mike for an example 去掉 an
3、after the school 去掉 the
4、lately late
5、many改成more
6、had been gone 改成had been going
7、yourselves改为 yourself
8、hardly改为 hard
9、made his mind 改成 made up his mind
一般改错是有一个对的,九个错的
我大部分是对的,

第一行are 改为 is ，to 改为 with
第二行 after the school 去掉the, for an example 去掉 an
第三行lately 改为 late, computer bar 改为 Internet bar
第四行 many 改为 much
第六行 yourselves 改为 yourself ，hardly 改为hard

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第一行are 改为 is ，to 改为 with
第二行 after the school 去掉the, for an example 去掉 an
第三行lately 改为 late, computer bar 改为 Internet bar
第四行 many 改为 much
第六行 yourselves 改为 yourself ，hardly 改为hard
最后一行 at改为 because of，made后面加多个up
请您看看可以吗？

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第一行are 改为 is ，to 改为 with
第二行 after the school 去掉the
第三行lately 改为 late, computer bar 改为 Internet bar
第四行 many 改为 much
第六行 yourselves 改为 yourself ，hardly 改为hard
最后一行 at改为 because o...

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第一行are 改为 is ，to 改为 with
第二行 after the school 去掉the
第三行lately 改为 late, computer bar 改为 Internet bar
第四行 many 改为 much
第六行 yourselves 改为 yourself ，hardly 改为hard
最后一行 at改为 because of，made his mind 改成 made up his mind
我能保证是对的，求楼主采纳！

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At present, playing computer games ⑴【are】（改为is）becomig more and more popular ⑵【to】（改为with）people, especially with students. Take Tom and Mike for ⑶【an】（去掉） example. Every day after ⑷【...

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At present, playing computer games ⑴【are】（改为is）becomig more and more popular ⑵【to】（改为with）people, especially with students. Take Tom and Mike for ⑶【an】（去掉） example. Every day after ⑷【the】（去掉） school, they go to the computer bar to play games till ⑸【lately】（改为late） at night, and they often have a competition to see who wins ⑹【many】（改为more） scores. Once, Tom didn't go home until eleven o'clock at night. When he got home, he told his mother he had been ⑺【gone】（改为going）over his lessons. Poor mom! She believed him and cooked two eggs for him. "Take more care of ⑻【youselves】（改为youself）as you work too ⑼【hardly】（改为hard）, my dear son." she said. Tom's face turned red at hs mother' praise. Later he made ⑽【】（加上up）his mind to work really hard.

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