请大家帮忙看看我的"英语一分钟自我介绍"在这里我希望大家能帮忙看看,评价,会英语的哥们帮忙看看语法和文字不擅长英语的兄弟也麻烦看下全篇是否流畅 ,英语:Hello,my dear teachersI am glad to b

请大家帮忙看看我的"英语一分钟自我介绍"在这里我希望大家能帮忙看看,评价,会英语的哥们帮忙看看语法和文字不擅长英语的兄弟也麻烦看下全篇是否流畅 ,英语:Hello,my dear teachersI am glad to b
请大家帮忙看看我的"英语一分钟自我介绍"
在这里我希望大家能帮忙看看,评价,
会英语的哥们帮忙看看语法和文字
不擅长英语的兄弟也麻烦看下全篇是否流畅 ,
英语:
Hello,my dear teachers
I am glad to be here for this interview.
My name is Li Junhao.I'm 14 years old.Icome from No.37 middle school of Xiangfan,a beautiful school.
At school,I am a good student,andEnglish is my favorite subject.I have a great English teacher .She's very young and beautiful.She let me feel the charm of english.
I like singing English songs,watching English movies,Ehglish articles _____ (等等←这个帮忙翻译下..)so many thins related to the English.
To participate in this competition is to improve my English and feel the atmosphere of the competition.I know I am not good enough in English,but I will try to do my best.
That's all.Thank you.

请大家帮忙看看我的"英语一分钟自我介绍"在这里我希望大家能帮忙看看,评价,会英语的哥们帮忙看看语法和文字不擅长英语的兄弟也麻烦看下全篇是否流畅 ,英语:Hello,my dear teachersI am glad to b
帮你改一下下~我把所有改的东西都放在 （---）
Hello,my dear teachers
I am glad to be here for this interview.
My name is Li Junhao (and) I'm 14 years old.I come from No.37 middle school of Xiangfan,(it is) a beautiful school.
At school,I am a good student,and English is my favorite subject.I have a great English teacher,（whose） very young and beautiful.She let(s) me feel the charm of english.
I like singing English songs,watching English movies,(and reading) E(n)glish articles (along with many other things related to English).
（The reason I want to) participate in this competition is (because I believe this is the best way) to improve my English.(I also want to challenge myself and be able to feel) the atmosphere of the competition.I know (my English is not good enough at the moment),but (I am willing to try my best and put all my effort into this competition)
(不需要thats all)
Thank you.
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希望可以帮到你一下 ^^
加油哦~

差不多可以说得通，那个横线上应该填 "and so on"