发给客户的English版休假通知,LUNA NEW YEAR TEMPORARY SHUT DOWNFeb.07th,2007Att:All Value CustomersPlease kindly be informed that our company will temporary shut down from Date Feb.12th,2007 to Feb.25th,2007.Resume worker on Feb.26th,2007 (Mo

发给客户的English版休假通知,LUNA NEW YEAR TEMPORARY SHUT DOWNFeb.07th,2007Att:All Value CustomersPlease kindly be informed that our company will temporary shut down from Date Feb.12th,2007 to Feb.25th,2007.Resume worker on Feb.26th,2007 (Mo
发给客户的English版休假通知,
LUNA NEW YEAR TEMPORARY SHUT DOWN
Feb.07th,2007
Att:All Value Customers
Please kindly be informed that our company will temporary shut down from Date Feb.12th,2007 to Feb.25th,2007.
Resume worker on Feb.26th,2007 (Monday)
There will be no delivery,receiving &servicing of goods during this period.
We would also wish to apologize for any inconvenience that may cause by this holiday closure.
We take this opportunity to thank you for your support in the past and certainly aspire to serve you even better in future.
The management and staffs would also like to wish you
"A VERY PROPEROUS AND HAPPY CHINESE NEW YEAR".
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发给客户的English版休假通知,LUNA NEW YEAR TEMPORARY SHUT DOWNFeb.07th,2007Att:All Value CustomersPlease kindly be informed that our company will temporary shut down from Date Feb.12th,2007 to Feb.25th,2007.Resume worker on Feb.26th,2007 (Mo
补充一些：
1 All Value Customers --- valued
2 (Please kindly be informed that) our company will temporary shut down from (Date) Feb.12th,2007 to Feb.25th,2007.---括号里的可以不要,temporary改temporarily
3 We (would also wish to )apologize for any inconvenience that may cause by this holiday closure.---that may cause by 改caused by
4 We (take this opportunity to )thank you for your support in the past and certainly aspire to serve you even better in future.

写得很好，没什么要修改的！！！
我就提一点语法上的吧
We would also wish to apologize for any inconvenience that may cause by this holiday closure.
that从句里边用被动语态 may be caused

写的是不怎么样,但还不用重写.
1.Resume worker on Feb.26th,2007 (Monday):worker改成WORK
2.We would also wish to apologize for any inconvenience that may cause by this holiday closure:cause 要改成CAUSED 因为你后面都用BY ...

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写的是不怎么样,但还不用重写.
1.Resume worker on Feb.26th,2007 (Monday):worker改成WORK
2.We would also wish to apologize for any inconvenience that may cause by this holiday closure:cause 要改成CAUSED 因为你后面都用BY 了.holiday也要改成形容词
后面那几句你再斟酌吧.有些话没必要说.如果发给中国客人,就没必要用英语,写错了会被笑话的.

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