一个英语句子纠错“It is a place of interest with convenience of traffic that attrasts many tourists pour in every year in my hometown.”我本意是想用一个强调句来表达，我想知道哪里有错误，与更好的表达方法。

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一个英语句子纠错“It is a place of interest with convenience of traffic that attrasts many tourists pour in every year in my hometown.”我本意是想用一个强调句来表达，我想知道哪里有错误，与更好的表达方法。
一个英语句子纠错
“It is a place of interest with convenience of traffic that attrasts many tourists pour in every year in my hometown.”我本意是想用一个强调句来表达，我想知道哪里有错误，与更好的表达方法。

一个英语句子纠错“It is a place of interest with convenience of traffic that attrasts many tourists pour in every year in my hometown.”我本意是想用一个强调句来表达，我想知道哪里有错误，与更好的表达方法。
It is a place of interest with traffic convenience that attrasts many tourists every year in my hometown.要把表语和定语分清楚

把interested改为interest

speak of my hometown, it is a wonderful place with several of interested places and convenience traffic, which attracts bunch of tourists every year.

It is a interested place for convenience of traffic in my hometown that attrasts many tourists pour in every year.

My hometown is so a wonderful place with convenient vehicles that many tourists are attracted to come.

句子呢？句子在哪里？