作业帮英语作文需要被批改!某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏,讨论中学生健康问题.请按以下提示,用Have a healthy lifestyle 为题为专栏写一篇稿：1.健康之重要人人皆知.2.许多年青少年不注重健康问题,尤
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英语作文需要被批改!某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏,讨论中学生健康问题.请按以下提示,用Have a healthy lifestyle 为题为专栏写一篇稿：1.健康之重要人人皆知.2.许多年青少年不注重健康问题,尤
英语作文需要被批改!
某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏,讨论中学生健康问题.请按以下提示,用Have a healthy lifestyle 为题为专栏写一篇稿：
1.健康之重要人人皆知.
2.许多年青少年不注重健康问题,尤其是假期.长时间看电视,通宵上网、玩游戏.导致的危害如：影响视力,身体虚弱,缺乏人际交往.
这是我写的一篇英语作文,不知道哪里有错误,
As far as i'm concerned ,it's extraordinary important for us to have a healthy life .
Everyone know that a healthy lifestyle is essential .In spire of paying no attention it for a number of students.On vacation,someone have watched TV for a long time at home.What's more,playing computer games day and night.Therefore the eyes are worse and worse,the body more and more worse.They lack of communicating with other people.
In my view ,as we are flowers in our country.We are supposed to have a mental health.We are able to play sports and have a wonderful diet.All and all,we have a happy a life ,we should protect our body .
英语作文需要被批改!某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏,讨论中学生健康问题.请按以下提示,用Have a healthy lifestyle 为题为专栏写一篇稿：1.健康之重要人人皆知.2.许多年青少年不注重健康问题,尤
As far as I'm concerned, it's extremely important for us to have a healthy life. Everyone knows that a healthy lifestyle is essential despite a large number of students that don't pay heed to this. Take for example during vacation, some people watch television for hours on end or face the computer day and night. Therefore, their eyesight gets worse and it affects the body as well. Staying indoors all day long also means they lack socializing with other people besides the people they live with.
最后那段有点看不懂,特别是‘国花’那部分,但前面那段已经修改好了.要是需要我继续帮忙可以把用中文写的第二段发上来,然后我再修改.有问题请追问.希望能帮到你.