我写了一个课前五分钟的英语演讲稿,请各位速速帮我看看,明天就得上场了!帮我看看有木有语法上啊,或者FriendshipI‘m an otaku.I usually surf the Internet daylong at the weekends .So I have many friendships on the

我写了一个课前五分钟的英语演讲稿,请各位速速帮我看看,明天就得上场了!帮我看看有木有语法上啊,或者FriendshipI‘m an otaku.I usually surf the Internet daylong at the weekends .So I have many friendships on the
我写了一个课前五分钟的英语演讲稿,请各位速速帮我看看,明天就得上场了!帮我看看有木有语法上啊,或者
Friendship
I‘m an otaku.I usually surf the Internet daylong at the weekends .So I have many friendships on the Internet .I like making friends on the Internet because I can say my say with them .In the computer game ,I have many friends ,but I think that isn't ture .So I do my best to keep my friendships in the real world .I think ture friendships is understand each other .With an old Chinese saying ,the ture friendship is people in the same condition help each other .I think if you smile to everybody ,you'll have many friendships .

我写了一个课前五分钟的英语演讲稿,请各位速速帮我看看,明天就得上场了!帮我看看有木有语法上啊,或者FriendshipI‘m an otaku.I usually surf the Internet daylong at the weekends .So I have many friendships on the
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I am an otaku.I usually surf the Internet daylong at the weekend .So I have many friends on the Internet .I like making friends on the Internet because I can say my say with them .In the computer game ,I have many friends ,but I think that isn't true.So I do my best to keep my friendship in the real world .I think true friends understand each other .As an old Chinese saying goes,the ture friends are those people in the same condition who help each other .I think if you smile to everybody ,you'll have many friends.

Friendship
I'm an otaku. I usually surf the Internet all day long on weekends .So I have many friends on line. I like making friends on the Internet because I can say anything I like with them fre...

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Friendship
I'm an otaku. I usually surf the Internet all day long on weekends .So I have many friends on line. I like making friends on the Internet because I can say anything I like with them freely. In the computer games, I also have many friends, but I think that isn't true. So I do my best to keep my friendship in the real world . I think ture friends are to understand each other . With an old Chinese saying says, the true friendship is people in the same condition and they help each other. I think if you smile to everybody , you'll have many friends easily.

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weekends前不要加the friendship是不可数名词不能加s前面也不可用many修饰 可换成many friends 。。。。呃 这个没法改啦 除非重写 每一句都......

“because I can say my say with them”改成say my word with them或communicate with them
“that isn't ture ture”“ture friendships ”的 单词ture写错了应该是true
“ I think ture friendships is understand each othe...

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“because I can say my say with them”改成say my word with them或communicate with them
“that isn't ture ture”“ture friendships ”的 单词ture写错了应该是true
“ I think ture friendships is understand each other ”中改成I think true friendship is to understand each other或understanding each other.
“with an old Chinese saying”改成there is an old saying
“the true friendship is people ....”改成the true friendship is that people......中间加个that同位语从句
最后祝你演讲成功！！！May you successful!!

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