请英语高手帮我修改一篇文章~我有一篇文章需要修改,我还是多作几句~可是我想不到了.星期一就要弄好~感激不尽.A meaningful lifeWhat is a meaningful life?Have you thought this question?Some people think that a m

请英语高手帮我修改一篇文章~我有一篇文章需要修改,我还是多作几句~可是我想不到了.星期一就要弄好~感激不尽.A meaningful lifeWhat is a meaningful life?Have you thought this question?Some people think that a m
请英语高手帮我修改一篇文章~
我有一篇文章需要修改,我还是多作几句~可是我想不到了.星期一就要弄好~感激不尽.
A meaningful life
What is a meaningful life?Have you thought this question?Some people think that a meaningful life is living in the present and enjoying every moment.Some people think that a meaningful life is a free life.Also some people think that a meaningful life has a warm family.People have their own definitions to a meaningful life.To me,I think a meaningful life is to do some meaningful things.Then,how should we do some meaningful things?It is not difficult.For example,we can help others.After we help them,we will feel very happy and they also feel very warm.They would like to help you next time.Because it’s better to give than to receive,so it is a happy thing to help others.
It is a simple behavior to help.But it will make us to most satisfaction in life.In my opinion,time is limited.When we are young,we should not spend time on the meaningless thing.We should not spend time on the meaningless thing,because we will certainly regret in the future.We should do more meaning things.So,the life will become too colorful.

请英语高手帮我修改一篇文章~我有一篇文章需要修改,我还是多作几句~可是我想不到了.星期一就要弄好~感激不尽.A meaningful lifeWhat is a meaningful life?Have you thought this question?Some people think that a m
A meaningful life
What is a meaningful life?Have you been thought about it?Some people think that a meaningful life is living in the present and enjoying every moment.Some of them think that a meaningful life is a free life and others think that a meaningful life is having a warm family.People have different thoughts about having a meaningful life.For me,a meaningful life is to do something meaningful.But how could we do something meaningful?It is not difficult.For example,we can help each others.After we help them,we feel happy and they feel warm as well.They would like to help you next time.It's better to give than to receive,so helping each other is great.
Helping others are simple,but it leads us to a most satisfaction in life.In my opinion,time is limited.We should not spend too much time on meaningless things because we will certainly regret in the future.We should do more meaning things instead,so our life will become more colorful.

A meaningful life
What is a meaningful life? Have you thought(about) this question? Some people think that a meaningful life is (cherishing the present ) and enjoying every moment. Some people th...

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A meaningful life
What is a meaningful life? Have you thought(about) this question? Some people think that a meaningful life is (cherishing the present ) and enjoying every moment. Some people think that a meaningful life is a free life. Also(,) some people think that a meaningful life (is to have ) a warm family. People have their own definitions to a meaningful life. To me, I think a meaningful life is to do some meaningful things. Then, how (can) we do some meaningful things? It is not difficult. For example, we can help others. After we help them, we will feel very happy and they also feel very warm. They would like to help you next time. Because it’s better to give than to receive, it is (very happy )to help others.
It is easy to help. But it will make us (feel) the most satisfactions in life. In my opinion, time is limited. When we are young, we should not spend time on the meaningless thing. We should not spend time on the meaningless thing, because we will certainly regret in the future. We should do more (meaningful) things. SO, the life will become more colorful.只帮你修改的语法，词汇错误哈。你文章有点重复了，翻来覆去的说帮助别人，有点流水账，其实有意义的生活有很多方面，不必只说帮助别人，还可以说点其他方面的，比如：要奋斗，追逐自己的梦想，关心父母等

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