找一篇英文文章中的语法知识和错误Hello,I read your letter to me,you said your son is very rebellious and bad,often give you trouble,so you want to formulate rules,and let him keep.but you don't know how to set the rules,so I'll give yo

找一篇英文文章中的语法知识和错误Hello,I read your letter to me,you said your son is very rebellious and bad,often give you trouble,so you want to formulate rules,and let him keep.but you don't know how to set the rules,so I'll give yo
找一篇英文文章中的语法知识和错误
Hello,I read your letter to me,you said your son is very rebellious and bad,often give you trouble,so you want to formulate rules,and let him keep.but you don't know how to set the rules,so I'll give you some advice.
First of all,your letter said that your son's room is very messy,often want you to clean up,then you should let him weekly cleaning his room at least once; secondly,you said he was not interested in studying,but often can not finish the homework,then I think you should talk to him and let him finish homework on time,; finally,you said that he often give you trouble,so I think you should let him deal with his own trouble yourself.
Thank you for your letter and your trust,the above is my suggestion,also wish your son to live with you.
这篇文章有什么语法错误和语法知识请帮我总结一下,

找一篇英文文章中的语法知识和错误Hello,I read your letter to me,you said your son is very rebellious and bad,often give you trouble,so you want to formulate rules,and let him keep.but you don't know how to set the rules,so I'll give yo
请楼主不要怪本人直言,这篇文章水平很低,句子重复又重复,而且文法上也有很多错,但我尽量保留原文替你更正一下:
(Hello只是在口语上使用,书信上是没有人用的,可以去掉),(I read your letter to me 应重写为:Thank you for your letter this morning),you said your son is very rebellious and bad,often give(第3者单数要用 gives) you trouble,so you want to formulate rules,and let him keep.but you don't know how to set the rules(.)(,so I'll give可以改写为:I think I may be able to offer 这会比较谦虚一些) you some advice.
First of all,your letter said that your son's room is very messy,often want(wants) you to clean up(for him),then you should let (ask 或 make) him (weekly位置错误,应放在句尾) cleaning(是 clean) his room at least once (weekly应放在这儿); secondly,you said he was not interested in studying,but(应改用 and) often can not(cannot 是一个字) finish the homework,then I think you should talk to him and let(应该用make) him finish (his) homework on time; finally,you said that he often give(gives) you trouble,so I think you should let him deal with his own trouble yourself (是himself).
Thank you for your letter and your trust,the above is(are) my suggestion(suggestions 多个一项建议),(also wish your son to live with you 这一句似不合情理,不知你想表达甚麼?"很希望你的儿子和你一起居住?"不如改为:I hope that you would find them helpful).
因为文章结构上的问题,虽然已替你更正了一些错漏,但仍然并不很完美.
很高兴可以帮到你,希望还会对你有助.

错误百出啊，最重要的，写作不能用do not的省略啊